polarising! i definitely enjoyed the quieter parts in this the most. you say you didn't have time to make anything beautiful but these sections sound like they have a lot of effort put into them, in spite of the random bursts of crazy instrumentation. the rest feels like you were trying to be funny or obtuse for the sake of it, or is just 2 disparate musical parts slapped together and not really refined any further. it is what it is, though. appreciate using the bass guitar part as a cohesive leitmotif, and the blown out drum kit does provide some consistency. hope you get inspired soon!
important notes on my NGUAC review process: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1476427/18#bbspost26965604_post_text