there's some interesting musical ideas in this that don't really come together well. i like the funeral march vibe with the minor key and the sombre sounding strings. not a fan of how loud everything is and how the entire mix completely blows out when it "drops". it doesn't really drop though because the kick is in the background, constantly pounding away on every 16th step. if you want to make a progressive house track this needs to be a lot less busy in every respect. if you want to make a busy and complex EDM track, turn everything down and be more deliberate about where you place the kick and snare drums within the beat.
important notes on my NGUAC review process: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1476427/18#bbspost26965604_post_text