bit of a journey, this one. the gradual transition from hard hitting industrial rock to the funeral march is an interesting idea! i think a lot of the instruments, especially the voices, lack the necessary weight and sometimes quality, that you need to achieve the big emotional impact you're going for. the drums definitely lack a lot of punch until the end, and then the kick keeps on punching way too hard compared to what's going on around it. the very fast snare roll sounds a little bit goofy tbh. the guitars are really nice though, but could use some doubletracking to widen them out, at least for the lower heavy parts. cool track though!
important notes on my NGUAC review process: https://www.newgrounds.com/bbs/topic/1476427/18#bbspost26965604_post_text